高考英語滿分作文真題范文一

　　【試題回放】

　　實現有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關系，不僅要善于言表，更要學會傾聽。請你根據下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演講稿。

　　注意：

　　1、對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。

　　2、詞數150左右。開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

　　3、演講稿中不得提及考生所在學校及本人姓名。

　　Good afternoon, everyone.

　　The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

　　Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

　　Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

　　What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

　　Thank you for your listening!

　　【名師點評】

　　這是一篇感情真摯、熱情洋溢的演講稿，文中大量運用排比句型，不但準確流暢地表達出題目中所提供的信息，而且體現出作者熟練運用英語的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同結構的復合句式，將傾聽的對象及其作用闡述得淋漓盡致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句議論應如何傾聽，則更進一步地增強了這篇演說稿的說服力。

　　高考英語滿分作文真題范文二

　　作文題目：

　　最近，你校同學正在參加某英文報組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票?請你根據下表所提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。

　　60%的同學認為:

　　1.不應該收門票

　　2.公園是公眾休閑的地方

　　3.如收門票，需建大門、圍墻，會影響城市形象

　　40%的同學認為:

　　1.應收 門票，但票價不要太高

　　2.支付園林工人工資

　　3.購新花木

　　注意：

　　1.信的開頭已為你寫好。

　　2.詞數：100左右。

　　3.參考詞匯：門票---entrance f ee

　　范文：

　　Dear editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think t hat an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either a t home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the par k and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

　　With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　高考英語滿分作文真題范文三

　　假設你是紅星中學高三(1)班的學生李華，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，用校刊“英語園地”寫一篇短文，記述你和同學們向學校提建議，解決自行車存放問題的過程。

　　There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數不少于 60.

　　2. 短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　考點：考察看圖作文

　　寫作指導：

　　本文屬于看圖作文。敘述的是李華和同學們向學校建議解決自行車存放的問題。屬于記敘文，使用第一人稱和一般過去時。

　　要點：

　　1.在自行車存放處前面，我看見很多人都擁擠在一起;

　　2.找到幾個同學一起討論具體解決方法。

　　3.找到校長提出建議;

　　4.校方采納建議，多開了一個進出的門。

　　看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉換成英語語言文字，再根據這些要點謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達出來，除了能表達清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據詞數要求，適當拓展并發揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、過程、結果這六個要素。

　　【一句多譯】

　　在我們學校自行車存放處有一個長久以來就存在的問題。

　　(1)There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school

　　(2)The parking place for bikes was an existing problem for a long time in our school。

　　【參考范文】

　　One possible version

　　There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggfestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.